Journey to the Top of Red Pine Mountain
- November 21, 2008
- Category: Daily Diary, Uncategorized
- (15) Comments
I have been going through some changes these past couple of weeks. I’m going to be blogging a little less, writing a little more (finally the idea for my novel has come to life in my mind) and, as always, seeking balance in my life. I know I have been remiss in picking up the awards you have given me and I will be acknowledging your kindness on my blog in the very near future.
Mountain Man is shelling up our new barn before the winter snows make outdoor work difficult and I’ve been trying to adjust to the days where darkness falls at 4:00 p.m. and the cold is penetrating my body every time I step outside.
I’m sharing with you today a story I wrote at the beginning of the month when I ventured to the top of Red Pine Mountain for the last time this fall.
Woods Walk
There was a full moon and a hard frost last night. The leaves are finally down from the trees and I wanted to hike to the top of Red Pine Mountain. The last time I was there, I was surrounded in a canopy of color and I am anxious to see how the scenery has changed.
The two shepherds join me and we decide to take the long way around our mountain to enjoy the rare November sunshine.
As we cross streams, the dogs stop to drink icy water and I listen to the sound of water rushing down the mountainside and my soul is soothed.
We continue on deep into our woods where there is an old cemetery forgotten by time. The carving on the headstones has almost disappeared with the ravages of the many winters yet the graves are still standing. I wonder about the people who lived on this land before me and my heart contracts as I see the many tiny headstones standing as a testament to a time when life was intertwined with death. The dogs are quiet by my side as I say silent, heartfelt prayers for these early settlers of
We continue on our journey. The dogs’ paws make crackling sounds as they joyously bound ahead over the golden leaves which cover our path. Their enthusiasm is contagious and I am filled with their love of life.
It’s steep now and no longer a real path; just overgrown brush. The dogs walk carefully in single file. I need do nothing except follow them.
We are at the top of Red Pine Mountain and the world falls away below us.
I am in awe.
We stay for awhile. The dogs play fight, stopping now and then to sniff under a fallen log, searching for treasures known only to them. I am still, lost in thoughts of my new life on this remote mountain. The wind lifts fallen leaves and they swirl around me.
I am humbled by the majesty of my surroundings and I am reminded that I am only a steward of the land, holding it in trust for future generations.
The sun is starting to set yet I am reluctant to break the spell which has fallen over me. I finally call to the dogs and we begin our steep descent. With each step, I stop to admire small things, seemingly inconsequential but exquisite in their own right; the one leaf left on a tree, the ferns now frozen until next spring.
Our farm lies in the valley. We’re almost there. I can see it now. Smoke is swirling from the chimney, the horses are in their pasture and the dogs left behind are barking a greeting. The familiar embraces me.
I am home.

I wish you all the very best with your novel
And I loved your piece of writing that you shared with us. Beautiful…I could picture it in my mind. Have a great weekend!
Date: November 21, 2008
I love to write also! I think maybe all of us BLOGGERS love to write. Please continue to share your words with us! PLEASE!!
I have two novels I have written both about grandparents, I am in the process of writing about my father. I found this one is hard, because it is writing about myself. I have to know myself to write about my father, that was surprising.
Please sometime take photos of the grave and post them, I have found that a lot of the bloggers also are genealogist and love cemeteries.
I have really, really, enjoyed getting to know you….who you are has reached across these virtural miles and touched my soul.
Linda
http://coloradofarmlife.wordpress.com
Date: November 21, 2008
What an eloquent description of your walk through the woods! I felt as though I were walking right along with you! It was nice visiting with you there today!
Date: November 21, 2008
You almost make me want to move back to the country…maybe one day.
Why is it your last time up to the top of the mountain ? I used to love the woods in the winter…as long as there wasn’t too much snow. I used to wander around off trail and explore…because I could always find my way back by my snow tracks….just avoid open fields (no trees)…they might actually be frozen bogs, pond, or lake type things with thin ice.
I always took my (young)dogs for a onetime walk on very thin ice (in a safe shallow known place) to let them make it crack and break. Worked like a charm, they were more afraid and phobic of open fields in the winter than me.
Date: November 21, 2008
I love your writing, I feel like I was on that walk with you and your dogs…thank you for that.
Bella
Date: November 21, 2008
Best wishes on your novel. You are a wonderful writer and I look forward to reading it.
Date: November 22, 2008
Wow! A novel!! I hope you will keep us posted on it.I loved the walk story. I know you will be writing, but hopefully you will still visit us in blogland some.
Tracey
Happy Thanksgiving
Date: November 22, 2008
Beautiful. Just beautiful!
Date: November 22, 2008
Wonderful Story thank you for sharing with us! Well I for one hope you don’t desert us totally..I would miss you! I hope you can find a balence between your writing and your blogging! We don’t need to hear lots, just bits and pieces here and there:)
Date: November 22, 2008
Don’t stay away too long! But have fun writing! This was a beautiful post, I wish I could write this well.
Date: November 22, 2008
I also felt like I was with you, what wonderful writing. Good luck with that novel and yes please keep us posted. Happy Sunday, God bless.
Date: November 23, 2008
What a wonderful and beautiful place to be able to call home. I feel like I was on the walk with you, reading your descriptive words. And I could feel the warmth of the fire and see the smoke rising from the chimney as I read – that welcoming feeling you get when the air is so crisp and it’s getting dark, and the lights and warmth draw you back inside for the night. I’m glad you are working on a novel – you are very gifted and you were meant to do this. But darkness falling at 4:00? Boy that really is a short day.
Date: November 23, 2008
I’m passing along the butterfly award to you that you can pick up at http://karenzemek.blogspot.com/2008/11/thanks-to-rebecca-for-this-butterfly.html
If you don’t want to fuss with passing it along, I understand, but your writing is so good I thought you deserved it.
Date: November 24, 2008
I just know your novel will be a success!
I also know that feeling when you see home again. It is wonderful.
Great story.
I wish you all the luck on your writing.
Pam
Date: November 24, 2008
Lovely description of your hike. I can tell you are really attached to your lands and feel your surroundings. I get the same way on my hikes when I am alone. I wish you the best on your writing. I am aspiring to greatness someday when I will attempt the same.
Date: November 25, 2008